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Prism: HA! Did you see me out there! 

Whirlwind: Yes Prism, I was with you.

Prism: No, no, no but did you see when I captured the other team's flag? Too easy!  I thought for sure I wasn't gonna make that dive 

Whirlwind: Heh, yeah, good job sweetie.

Prism: OH and on the spinny thing! Dude, it was SOOOO easy! I don't get what the big deal about it is.

Whirlwind: Well, Prism, not everypony is as naturally talented as you are and–

Prism: Not even close! *sighs* So many academy records.

Whirlwind: Mmhm

Prism: Oooooh and then–

Whirlwind: Prism, can we just eat please? You're gonna talk the whole lunch break away and have no energy for the next exercises

Prism: Psh, I guess. But for the record, I could probably outdo any of these losers even on an empty stomach

Whirlwind: *opens mouth to speak and looks down*

Dream Catcher: Hey guys!

Whirlwind: Hello

Prism: *does a quick head nod while he eats*

Dream Catcher: Um, just wanted to say good job out there. Both of you are really good at flying!

Prism: You know it

Whirlwind: *rolls eyes at Prism and looks back that the other pegasus* Thank you. That really means a lot

Dream Catcher: No problem! M-maybe you could teach me some of your tricks sometime!

Whirlwind: Oh, we'd love to–

Prism: What's in it for us?

Dream Catcher: Oh, um... I dunno

Prism: I mean, getting help from us is like getting professional help. I'n't that right, Dubz? *wraps hoof around her*

Whirlwind: .........

Dream Catcher: Well, I mean I could give you a few bits or–

Whirlwind: No, don't say that. You don't need to

Prism: Oooh bits, huh?

Dream Catcher: I... yeah. I feel like I could learn a lot from both of you

Whirlwind: *mumbles* You certainly won't learn how to have a good attitude. Look, you don't have to say all this stuff. It's just gonna make his ego bigger

Prism: Pfft, what ego?

Whirlwind: The fact that you don't even know you have one means you have a HUGE one

Prism: I wouldn't call it an ego. Pride maybe, but not an ego. I'm just embracing my talent and the fact that.... well, I can do some things better than a lot of these guys.

Whirlwind: .............. you're kidding right?

Prism: .......No? Are you saying that I shouldn't be proud?

Whirlwind: No. You have every right to be proud, Prism. You're a real talented guy. I'm saying you shouldn't be cocky and make everypony else feel like they're worse than you are and that you're on some sort of high pedestal

Prism: But it's the truth though

Whirlwind: Prism, nopony is any worse than you are and you have no right to talk down to them

Prism: *shrugs* Eh.

Whirlwind: ................ that's it? That's all you have to say?

Prism: .... Yeah, I guess. Would you rather me argue with you?

Whirlwind: ..........That it. I'm done *stands up*

Prism: What

Whirlwind: I'm tired, Prism Bolt. I can't deal with you and your attitude anymore.

Prism: Are you...

Whirlwind: Breaking up with you? Yes.

Prism: Why? Where is this even coming from??

Whirlwind: Prism, I've addressed this problem with you so many times. You just don't listen!

Prism: No you haven't!

Whirlwind: Yes I have! I know what I said!

Prism: And I know what I heard! You–

Whirlwind: Well, apparently, you heard absolutely nothing.

Prism: Dubz–

Whirlwind: You have a lot of thinking to do Prism.

Prism: .............. Well it's your loss

Whirlwind: Of course it is. You keep telling yourself that *looks toward the other pegasus* C'mon. Let's go outside. I can show you a couple quick tricks before lunch ends

Dream Catcher: Oh, really? Wow thanks!

*Whirlwind and the Dream Catcher walk away*

Prism: *snorts*
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Whirlwind: So what would you like to know, Catch?

Dream Catcher: Oh, anything really. But um.... are you sure you wanna do this? After.....

Whirlwind: It's fine. I promise. *smiles* So would you like to know how to do flips or like techniques on how to go faster or....

Dream Catcher: Hmmm... Well, I've never been all that great at doing sharp turns 

Whirlwind: Aw well that's pretty simple you just gotta make sure you look to where you're going to turn and–
 
Prism: Dip your wing as fast as you can in that same direction

Whirlwind: ........

Prism: I taught her that

Dream Catcher: O-oh....

Whirlwind: Prism, please.....

Prism: I'm just trying to help like you said!

Whirlwind: I– Ugh!

Prism: Well, jeeze, then I won't help!

Whirlwind: Please Prism, now's not the time.

Prism: Fine! Well then Dream Catcher, you could watch Whirlwind here, or you can watch the master 

Dream Catcher: *looks at Whirlwind and back to Prism* Ummm....

Prism: *takes off and starts flying and doing tricks*

Whirlwind: *sighs* You can watch him if you want. He is a better flier than I am.

Dream Catcher: It's okay. You seem a bit nicer and less scary than him

Whirlwind: *chuckles* Well then can you spread your wings for me?

Dream Catcher: *opens wings*

Whirlwind: So when you're in the air what you wanna do is...

Prism: *Keeps flying but notices that Whirlwind isn't watching. While watching her, her crashes face first into one of the pillars on the building* GAH!

Whirlwind and Dream Catcher: *look over to Prism*

Prism: *falls to the ground*

Whirlwind: PRISM! *runs over to him*

Prism: *groans* 

Whirlwind: Oh Celestia, your muzzle *pulls out a ripped up napkin* Dream Catcher, can you get some help?

Dream Catcher: *nods and runs inside*

Whirlwind: Prism, can you hear me?

Prism: *gets up slowly and turns away* Ow *puts hoof on nose*

Whirlwind: Prism, look at me. Let me put this on.

Prism: Now you care about me?

Whirlwind: Prism you're hurt, of course I care!

Prism: ............. *tries to move but hisses in pain*

Whirlwind: PRISM! Stop being so stubborn and let me help you so you don't bleed to death!

Prism: ............................. *turns around*

Whirlwind: *winces at the sight and puts the napkin on*

Prism: OUCH!

Whirlwind: ......................

Prism: ..........................

Whirlwind: .........................

Prism: ............ Are we really... done?

Whirlwind: Yes. I thought I made that clear

Prism: But–

Whirlwind: Prism, please. Just don't.

Prism: Dubz...

Whirlwind: I don't wanna talk right now, okay?

Prism: ...........................

Whirlwind: ................... The ambulance is coming. You take care of..... that, okay?

Prism: ................ 'kay.

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The scar story yaaaaaaaay. So many of you asked about Prism's scar. It's in the Ultimate Next Gen Guide but no one really realized I guess haha. It's not necessarily canon as you guys can make up your own stories about how you think it might've happened. This is just kinda my take and it felt fitting to have it tie in with Prism and Whirlwind's break up.

Oh and Dream Catcher's just a random character. There's no design so no need to look through my gallery for him.
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iPhone 6
Shutter Speed
1/15 second
Aperture
F/2.2
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
250
Date Taken
Jan 28, 2015 11:12:46 PM -08:00
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I can only guess how this happened in the human world; someone records this on their phones, Whirlwind and Prism finds out, and it becomes one of the reasons Prism drops out of the academy